Discussion for the ever-lasting story

[anon5664829]

Me as well. I'm not really seeing how the last few posts even really fit together. The story was going really good if I do say so myself.

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You saved the desperate attempt of salvaging that story good job sir, good job. To clarify a poster made it that O'Donel would be killed another poster and I however decided to keep him alive, things should be smooth now.

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[draconianchaos]

Yeah correcting that caused quite the mess.

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[anon5664829]

Yeah correcting that caused quite the mess.

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Indeed.

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[draconianchaos]

Glad it's moving again. I was getting lonely.

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[wizzrah]

You guys should keep the main character with no name. Don't reveal it until the end. if this story ever finishes, I'll make sure you make a pdf version of it...

 

[draconianchaos]

I was actually considering making an "official" Google doc of the story. For myself to keep track whenever there were discrepancies. Ease of access and such.

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[anon5664829]

I was actually considering making an "official" Google doc of the story. For myself to keep track whenever there were discrepancies. Ease of access and such.

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Good idea. Make it accessible to everyone here

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[draconianchaos]

Will do. I'll have time after the podcast tomorrow. If the doc is supposed to be "official" it should be tense consistent. What tense should be used?

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[wizzrah]

Will do. I'll have time after the podcast tomorrow. If the doc is supposed to be "official" it should be tense consistent. What tense should be used?

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I can doooooooooo it. First person.

 

[draconianchaos]

? I didn't ask about point of view...



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[wizzrah]

? I didn't ask about point of view...



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Whoops my bad I don't know why I said point of view lol. I guess I thought too fast... :-\

 

[draconianchaos]

So present or past tense?

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[wizzrah]

So present or past tense?

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Present tense? O_O

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[mynameis]

So is O'Donnell part of like the CIA kinda thing? Or something along those lines? I guess that would help out knowing.

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[draconianchaos]

When I had him shot I had him in the DEA as I'd just finished Breaking Bad lol. But since that's been revoked his government affiliation hasn't been specified.

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[mynameis]

But he is in the government of some sorts, correct?

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[draconianchaos]

Tentatively I feel it can lead to exciting things later.

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[anon5664829]

Tentatively I feel it can lead to exciting things later.

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I wanna say that only the defence sector knows about O'Donnels organisation. The rest of the government knows nothing.

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