nexusisneecesary
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Sorry to hijack chatter for a minute I'm writing a book-ish for school, I need to know if this is good,thanks for any opinion if you want I can try and explain the twist at the end of the paragraph you don't have to read but if you want please do,thanks
I woke in a chill, afraid to open my eyes,for fear of what i may find.I listen for sounds, the creak of the old wood floor, a voice, a whisper. I hear nothing but the sound of waves rolling, and vehicles passing and the ticking of a grandfather clock. slowly i open my eyes.I turn find no one lying next to me,I fear that she has left, I look for her but to no avail, I walk back to my room defeated and alone,I turn on the light to find a note left on the night stand. "You're probably feeling alone and shaken to the core" the note drops from my and falls like broken glass. A shockwave echoes around the room as lights flicker all around me. I'm staring out my window just home from school on a warm summers day.
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I woke in a chill, afraid to open my eyes,for fear of what i may find.I listen for sounds, the creak of the old wood floor, a voice, a whisper. I hear nothing but the sound of waves rolling, and vehicles passing and the ticking of a grandfather clock. slowly i open my eyes.I turn find no one lying next to me,I fear that she has left, I look for her but to no avail, I walk back to my room defeated and alone,I turn on the light to find a note left on the night stand. "You're probably feeling alone and shaken to the core" the note drops from my and falls like broken glass. A shockwave echoes around the room as lights flicker all around me. I'm staring out my window just home from school on a warm summers day.
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