Aquila
Retired Moderator
Re: "only 500,000 Moto Xs sold in third quarter"
I'd consider replacing, "That kind of proves..." with, "That could suggest to me that..." in order to make this a stronger point. Proof would be Moto releasing a statement that says, "The Moto X is not selling as well as we anticipated", and even then we'd have to translate between the statement and the context they're making it under, to keep a clear perspective on what their actual up front expectations were and what their modified expectations have become over time, etc.
Was reading an article on this today and Motorola laid off 200 employees from the plant (basicly a whole assembly shift) and the jobs were expected to last into next year. That kind of proves it is not selling as good as Motorola expected it too.
I'd consider replacing, "That kind of proves..." with, "That could suggest to me that..." in order to make this a stronger point. Proof would be Moto releasing a statement that says, "The Moto X is not selling as well as we anticipated", and even then we'd have to translate between the statement and the context they're making it under, to keep a clear perspective on what their actual up front expectations were and what their modified expectations have become over time, etc.