Discussion for the ever-lasting story

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As I said this is discussion for the ever lasting story, it does indeed detract from the story line.

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Brilliant now there's a place to do things properly. Should help things along nicely.

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I lost track of the story. You guys are really into it! Lol, I'm gonna have to read everything and get back into the story!

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Okay so we're keeping O'Donnell. Let's get this story back on the road ;) haha

I really don't know if I want confrontation between the main character and O'Donnell this early on in the story.

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No the revolver was all part of O'Donnell's plan while under surveillance by the mob.

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Okay so we're keeping O'Donnell. Let's get this story back on the road ;) haha

I really don't know if I want confrontation between the main character and O'Donnell this early on in the story.

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Read my part. It explains how O'Donnel survives.

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The main character should have his memory erased thus explaining why O'Donnel not hurting the main character even he though he shot at O'Donnel.
Everyone but the main character knows his memory has been erased.

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So implement something like a black out from the blood spatter from the graze. (it fits better as blood was mentioned spraying the MC's face in the original post).

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Well I think the obvious route is to follow O'Donnell from where I left off. I had something earlier. Unfortunately I'm running on pure caffeine in order to fix my circadian rhythm for school next week so my mind is rather haywire at the moment.

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Alright, can anybody enlighten me on what's going on? I want to get back into the story!
 
Alright, can anybody enlighten me on what's going on? I want to get back into the story!

It kinda feels like the story just kinda stopped. We went from Chapter 2 to 3 in the matter of 2 posts. I dunno what's a going on.

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